Hi, I was looking for a Lumix TZ15 Camera and found your Becex website. I noticed that the English was really bad and unprofessional(sorry if I'm hurting someone's feelings). I've re-written your text and corrected the grammer and spelling. Just replace your text with mine and I guarantee you will create a better impression and do more business! Best wishes.
" We are an importer, wholesaler and supplier of mobile phones and associated products manufactured by many leading brands including Nokia, Motorola, Sony Ericsson, and Samsung. We are based in Melbourne, Australia.
Becex has been established for over a year (still young indeed), but we are very aware that customer support is crucial to our business because most small wholesalers of mobile phones do not provide an adequate support and warranty infrastructure for the products they supply. We do.
We guarantee that our prices are the lowest compared to any other suppliers – when factoring in our cast iron warranties and overall product support. This provides our retail customers the confidence to focus all their attentions on marketing.
Currently, we are a major supplier of mobile phones to many retail outlets in Melbourne and elsewhere.
We look forward to doing business with your company. Feel free to contact us for further information, a quotation or just to know more about us.
We welcome enquires from any Australian company or business including any international company based in Australia with an ABN (Australian business number). "